Writing Button Text That Isn't Just 'Submit'
Here's a tiny piece of copy that gets almost no attention relative to how much it actually matters: the two or three words on your button, right at the exact moment someone decides whether to follow through. 💖 'Submit' answers nothing. 'Get my free quote' answers everything a hesitant visitor needs to know in four words.
What most businesses get wrong
Default platform text, 'Submit', 'Send', gets used without ever being rewritten. Generic action words like 'Click Here' or 'Learn More' don't say what happens next, and identical button text gets used across completely different forms and contexts, missing the chance to be specific to each one's actual outcome.
The button text formula bank
- Instead of 'Submit': 'Get My Free Quote', 'Send My Enquiry', 'Check My Eligibility'
- Instead of 'Learn More': 'See How It Works', 'Compare Our Packages', 'Read the Full Guide'
- Instead of 'Sign Up': 'Start My Free Trial', 'Join the Waitlist', 'Reserve My Spot'
- Instead of 'Contact Us': 'Book a Free 15-Minute Call', 'Ask Us a Quick Question'
- Instead of 'Download': 'Get the Checklist', 'Send Me the Guide'
How to roll it out
Audit every form and button across your website in one sitting, noting current text. Rewrite each to state the specific outcome, not just the action. Keep button text short, generally under five words, so it still reads clearly on mobile.
Mistakes to avoid
- Leaving default platform text unchanged
- Using vague action words with no stated outcome
- Using identical text across different forms and contexts
- Writing button text too long to read clearly on mobile
- Forgetting to update button text when the underlying offer changes
Frequently asked questions
Does this really move conversion rates meaningfully?
Modestly on its own, but it's one of the lowest-effort, zero-cost changes available, and it compounds with other CRO fixes rather than working in isolation.
Should every button be different?
Not necessarily. Consistency matters where the outcome genuinely is the same across pages, but don't default to identical text purely out of habit when the outcome actually differs.
What's the honest nuance?
Button text can't fix a fundamentally unclear offer. If visitors don't understand what they're getting before they reach the button, rewriting the button alone won't solve the deeper clarity problem.
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