Words to Cut From Your Website That Make You Sound Like Everyone Else
Read your own homepage out loud right now. If it could describe basically any business in your industry without changing a word, that's the problem this post is about. 💖 The words themselves aren't evil — "solutions" isn't a swear word — but when a page is built almost entirely out of these generic phrases, it stops saying anything at all. Visitors skim straight past it because their brain has learned that this kind of language means "filler," and filler doesn't earn trust or clicks.
What most businesses get wrong
The mistake is copying the tone of other businesses in the same space, assuming that's what "professional" sounds like. It usually happens without anyone deciding to do it — a business starts with a template, borrows phrasing from a competitor's site that felt polished, and ends up with a page that sounds like everyone else's page. The businesses that stand out aren't necessarily the best writers; they're the ones willing to say something specific and slightly less safe than "we're passionate about delivering quality solutions."
Search your website copy for these words, and each time you find one, replace it using the swap rule next to it:
- "Solutions" → Name the actual thing you do. ("We build custom shelving" beats "storage solutions.")
- "Passionate about" → State what you actually do differently, not how you feel about it. Feelings aren't proof.
- "Leading provider of / industry-leading" → Cut entirely unless you can back it with a specific, verifiable fact. Otherwise it's just noise every competitor also claims.
- "Committed to excellence / quality" → Replace with what "excellence" actually looks like in practice — a process, a guarantee, a standard you hold yourself to.
- "Synergy / leverage / streamline" (corporate jargon) → Say the plain-English version. If you can't, you probably don't need the sentence.
- "Innovative / cutting-edge" → Describe the specific thing that's new or different, and let the reader decide if that's innovative.
- "We value our customers" → Show it with a specific policy or behaviour (response time, guarantee, how you handle issues) instead of stating it.
The one-line test for any sentence you're unsure about: "Could my closest competitor put this exact sentence on their website?" If yes, rewrite it until the answer is no.
How to actually implement this
This is a genuinely fast fix compared to most website work, because you're editing existing pages rather than rebuilding them:
- Copy your key pages into a document and search for the words on the swap list above.
- For each hit, apply the competitor test — if a rival could say the exact same sentence, rewrite it to be specific to you.
- Replace vague claims with one concrete detail each: a number, a process step, a real policy, an actual example.
- Read the edited version aloud — if it still sounds like it could describe a different business in your space, keep cutting.
- Get one honest, outside pair of eyes on the final version — it's hard to spot your own generic phrasing after reading it fifty times.
- Don't assume formal automatically means credible — vague formal language often reads as less trustworthy than plain, specific language.
- Don't cut a generic word without replacing it with something specific — the goal is substitution, not just deletion.
- Don't copy competitor phrasing because it "sounds established" — if everyone uses it, it's not doing any work for you.
- Don't make unverifiable superlative claims ("the best," "the leading") — these can be genuinely misleading if you can't back them up.
- Don't do a one-off pass and forget about it — generic phrasing creeps back in with every new page written under time pressure.
Frequently asked questions
Isn't some of this language necessary to sound professional?
Real nuance here: a small amount of polish is fine, and not every sentence needs to be radically plain-spoken. The issue isn't formality, it's vagueness — you can be professional and specific at the same time. The words worth cutting are the ones that could apply to literally any business.
What if my industry genuinely uses these terms and customers expect them?
Fair point, and worth testing rather than assuming. Some technical or industry-standard terms are genuinely searched for by your audience, so cutting them entirely could hurt findability. Keep terms your audience actually uses and searches for; cut the ones that exist purely to sound impressive.
How do I find these words without reading every page manually?
Use your browser's find function or a basic word search across your site's text for the common offenders (solutions, passionate, leading, excellence, innovative, synergy). Blunt tool, genuinely effective — most sites are surprised how often these words repeat.
Will rewriting this way actually change my conversion rate?
It's reasonable to expect an improvement in clarity and time-on-page, but be cautious about promising a specific lift — conversion is affected by plenty of other factors too (offer, pricing, trust, page speed). Treat clearer copy as removing one obstacle, not a guaranteed fix on its own.
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