Why Your "Why Choose Us" Page Sounds Like Everyone Else's
Try this test: read your "why choose us" section, then imagine your closest competitor's page. If you could swap the two and nobody would notice, the page isn't doing its job. Most "why choose us" pages aren't wrong, they're just interchangeable — which, to a comparison-shopping customer, is functionally the same as not having one at all. 💖
What most businesses get wrong
The most common mistake is listing qualities instead of proof — "we're experienced" instead of "we've been doing this specific thing for eleven years and have handled [specific scenario] more times than most." The second is writing the page once, early on, and never revisiting it as the business actually develops real, specific differentiators worth naming.
For every generic claim on your page, ask "what's the specific, provable version of this?" and rewrite it:
- "Experienced" → "We've specifically handled [X number] of [specific scenario type] in the last [timeframe]."
- "Friendly service" → name the actual thing you do differently — same-day replies, a specific onboarding step, a policy competitors don't have.
- "Great value" → be specific about what's included that others charge extra for, or explain your actual pricing philosophy honestly.
- "Quality" → name the specific process, standard or check that produces it — a guarantee, a certification, a specific method.
How to rewrite your page
Go line by line through your current "why choose us" content, and for each claim, ask whether a competitor could genuinely copy it word for word. If yes, replace it with a specific number, process, policy or fact only true of your business. Cut anything you can't make specific — a shorter, honest page beats a longer, generic one.
Mistakes to avoid
- Listing generic qualities instead of specific, checkable facts.
- Writing the page once and never updating it as real differentiators emerge.
- Making claims you can't actually back up if a customer asked for detail.
- Trashing or comparing unfavourably against named or implied competitors — stick to your own specifics.
Frequently asked questions
What if we genuinely don't have anything unique yet?
Look for process and policy differences before assuming there's nothing — response times, guarantees, what's included, how you handle problems are all fair game even if the core service itself is similar to competitors'.
How long should this page be?
As long as it takes to make three or four genuinely specific points, no longer — padding with more generic claims weakens the page rather than strengthening it.
Should we mention competitors directly?
Generally no — focus entirely on your own specifics rather than comparisons, which can come across as defensive or petty even when accurate.
Does this page need updating regularly?
Revisit it whenever something genuinely changes — a new guarantee, a process improvement, a new certification — rather than on a fixed schedule; stale specifics are almost as weak as generic claims.
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