How to Write a Google Business Profile Description That Ranks
Most business descriptions read like an “About Us” page having a boring day — yet this little box quietly influences whether you show up in local search. Here's how to write one that actually pulls its weight, with a formula you can copy in five minutes. 💖
First, what most businesses get wrong
- Writing for themselves, not the searcher — “award-winning, boutique, bespoke” tells Google (and a stressed customer) nothing about what you do.
- Burying the point — the thing you actually do shouldn't arrive in sentence four.
- Keyword-stuffing — “Gold Coast lawyer, Gold Coast solicitor, Gold Coast legal” reads like a robot and Google is well past rewarding it.
- Forgetting the location — no suburb or region means you're invisible for “near me” searches.
- Using 90 of your 750 characters — you've been given room to be useful; use it.
The fill-in-the-blank formula
Steal this structure and drop your details in — it covers every job the description needs to do, in order:
That's it — five moves: what, who, where, why-you, and the next step. Now here's what it looks like filled in.
Three real examples
Notice how each leads with the service and the suburb, sounds human, and ends with a clear next step — no waffle. 📈
Where your keywords actually go
Google reads the whole description, but it weights the opening most — so your main service and location belong in the first sentence, phrased the way a customer would type them (“family lawyer”, not “legal practitioner specialising in family law matters”). Mention your key services once, naturally, and your suburb once or twice — then stop. Reading naturally beats reading “optimised” every time.
Mistakes that quietly bury your description
- Copy-pasting your homepage intro — it's usually written for browsers, not searchers.
- Being vague to sound premium — “tailored solutions” helps no one find you.
- Setting and forgetting — an out-of-date description misses new services and searches.
- Cramming every service in — lead with your core few; the rest live in your services list.
Frequently asked questions
Does the Google Business Profile description affect my ranking?
It's a supporting factor, not the biggest lever — your categories, reviews, proximity to the searcher and overall profile completeness carry more weight. But a clear, relevant description helps Google understand you and helps people choose you once you show up, so it's still well worth getting right.
How long should the description be?
You get up to 750 characters — aim to use most of them. Somewhere around 500–750 gives Google real context and gives customers enough to trust you, without padding.
Can I include links, phone numbers or offers?
No — Google strips out URLs, phone numbers and anything that reads like a special offer, and flags profiles that try. Put those in the dedicated fields and keep the description about what you do.
How often should I update it?
Refresh it whenever your services, focus or locations change, and give it a quick review every few months. A description that still describes last year's business is a missed chance to show up for what you do now. 🌴
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